The Visitor: Snapshots: Part 2
Submitted by dmuth on Fri, 2006-02-24 15:29.
Furry Fiction
Flash! And there I was. Where is there? There is here, Naline's world. And it was on fire. The entire savanna was blazing angrily all around me. Thunderous plumes of thick black smoke rose furiously, obscuring the sun, bathing all the nearby real estate in a bizarre orange glow. I hate it when that happens. "Kitten?" I couldn't see her anywhere. That was bad. I could hardly breathe. That was bad too. I had brought my combat helmet. That was good. That was very, very good, because it meant that I could breathe safely. And use the high-tech gizmos in the helmet to find her. As the helmet systems came online, a piercing high-pitched noise came through the sound amplifiers. Great, just what I needed, feedback noise. Come on, what's wrong with this thing?, I just got it calibrated. Wait a minute that wasn't feedback noise, that was a yell. That was Naline! Where where where? I looked around desperately for my little Kitten. I was standing in the middle of a grassy clearing, which was on fire. There were about a dozen trees dotting the nearby landscape, which were also on fire. And there was lots and lots of black smoke, which wasn't on fire, but got in the way of seeing things like little lost lionesses. Lions usually aren't afraid of grassland fires, because they can run quickly enough to avoid them. A hop, a jump, and a skip, and they are out of harm's way. But where in the world was Naline? And why couldn't she get away? The yell came again, and this time I was able to locate its panicky source. She was way up in a tree. The good thing was that she was safe for the moment because the tree wasn't on fire. The bad thing was that the flames had completely surrounded the tree, and were beginning to spread to the lower branches. Not much time. I was ever so very glad I had shelled out the big bucks to buy the suit I was wearing. Not just because it was bullet and blast proof, but because it was fireproof too. Heck, it was everything-proof. Kinda gives you a warm fuzzy feeling inside to know that there's nothing that anyone can throw against you that will harm you. Oops, sorry, didn't mean to make a bad pun, there. But it was true. It was also true that Naline did not have the benefit of a big-bucks suit to keep her untoasted, so I did like the proverb says and jumped from the frying pan into the fire. Have you ever walked through fire unscathed? It's a marvelously empowering feeling, you should try it sometime. Imagine the atmosphere itself incandescing from the heat, white-hot fire blazing all around you. Flames gushing from the burning grass, exploding around your feet with every step, swirling up your legs, rolling past your body, whirling around your arm with every movement as you walk. I held out my hand and watched the fire play around my fingers. It almost made me cry, it was so pretty. And hot as hell. Literally. Say, did I ever tell you about the time I went to hell? It looked just like this. I'll tell you about it later, when I don't have to rush to the rescue. "Hang on, Kitten," I yelled, "I'm coming!" If she answered, I didn't notice because I was trying to solve the problem of how to climb a charred, charcoal-covered tree. Charcoal, in case you didn't know, is slippery stuff, and it doesn't make for good climbing. Good sliding, yes, but not good rescuing. Crud. Wish I had claws. Hang on, I did have claws. In one of these pouches of my load-bearing harness I carry climbing claws. Now, where did I put them? Gotta take inventory one of these days. Ah, there they were! I quickly put them on and zipped up the tree in no time. When I got to Naline, she was completely covered from tip to top in black soot. She looked like a little black panther with large green eyes. Very becoming. "Didn't your mother ever teach you not to climb trees during thunderstorms and fires?" "Get me out of here!" From the panic in her voice to the fear in her eyes, Naline was the very picture of a trapped, cornered animal that knows there's no escape and it's about to die. She didn't have to worry, though; the cavalry was here. "Alright, alright, keep your whiskers on. Here, breathe through this." I stuck a respirator in her mouth, just the thing to keep her from choking to death on the suffocating smoke. "Don't make that face at me, just do it!" I wrapped her up in a sheet of thermal foil, the kind they wrap re- entry vehicles in, and held her tight. It was then that I realized that they never taught burning-tree descending back at combat school. That's what we get when the government gets a hold of public education. I bet if I'd gone to a private combat school, they would have taught everything from burning-tree descending to ice- covered-ladder ascending. Well, I'd just have to improvise and not fall. Naturally, the next thing I did was fall. I banged every tree branch on the way down. Twice, I think. I hit the blazing ground with a back-breaking, rib-cracking thud. Fortunately for Naline, the rib that had cracked didn't belong to her. "Don't squirm!" I could hardly breathe, much less shout out instructions, so I just kinda squooshed her till she sat still. Sorry, Kitten, no time for gentleness. I laid on the fiery, burning grass for a few seconds until my lungs figured out how to breathe again. It was quite unpleasant. I got up with a painful grunt, carrying Naline in my arms. Was it me or had she gotten heavier since the last time we met? Better not ask her. It's not gentlemanly to ask ladies about their weight. I ambled down the blazing savanna, upwind towards the fire line. If I could get to the other side of the fire, the side that had already burned out, we'd be safe from the flames. Come on, how wide can this fire line be? Naline was safely tucked in my arms, but I could feel her shaking and shivering like crazy. Poor thing was probably scared to death. "Hang on, Kitten, just a little bit longer." Come on, where's the edge of this inferno? Speaking of the devil, I took two more steps and the view immediately cleared. We emerged from the writhing wall of rising black smoke and blazing flames, past the windy vacuum zone at the edge of the fire, and into the charred remains of the grasslands. The fire had already burned everything in sight, leaving behind only a plain of cooling cinders and charred trees. I was struck by the sharp contrast between the brilliant blue of the sky with the dull black remains of the savanna. I located the least unpleasant spot and deposited my precious cargo on the ashy grass. "You can come out now," I said with a grunt as I tried to find the least painful way to sit down, "we're okay now." "Are you sure?" She stuck her little face out of the bundle of thermal sheeting and checked around to make sure I wasn't lying. "Aaaah! What happened to you?" "It's just a helmet. Hang on," I took the protective headgear off, "see?" "Oh," I pointed at the respirator, "you can spit it out now." She made a face as she took the unfamiliar thing out of her mouth. "My, how you've grown," I commented with a smile as I brushed the soot off her face. She really had; she seemed about twice as big as last time I'd seen her. That would make her, what, a lioness teenager? I'd need to look that up when I got back. "Hold still." The golden tan of her lion fur appeared once again as I dusted the black ashes off her. "You okay, Cruz?" She gave me a concerned look-over. Hey, broken ribs ain't easy to hide. You try it sometime. "Just bopped a rib, Kitten. Don't worry about it, I've got more." I slumped forward and rested my elbows on my crossed legs, the least uncomfortable position I could find. "Just gimme a second to catch my breath." "You look great, Kitten." And she did. Except for the soot, I mean. She was now a little larger than your average dog, but she was unmistakably feline. Her expressive green eyes hadn't changed a bit, they still had that intelligent glint. And the same indefinable charm that could bend my will like a blade of grass. I could argue and rage and hold my own against crusty old colonels and dogged sea captains, but there was something about Naline... something that bypassed all my flinty defenses and could make me act against my better judgment simply with that irritatingly wonderful look she had. Good thing for me that she was on my side. "No I don't." Naline examined herself critically. "I'm covered with black stuff and I smell like smoke and my fur is all disarrayed and..." Out of the corner of her eye I caught a glance that said "feel free to interrupt me and contradict me anytime." "Yes you do." She raised one eyebrow, looking as pitiful as a lost kitten seeking its mother. "You do," I insisted. "You've grown a lot since I last saw you and... hey, let me see those claws." Despite Naline's best efforts to hide it, I could feel the pride leaking out of her as she splayed out her set of feline claws. "Wow," I took her front paw in my hands and tested the tip of each claw, "nice. Very sharp." Her wrist had gotten bigger too, and the bracelet was beginning to get a little tight. I'd have to get her another one for next time. She was growing into the powerful predator I knew she'd one day be. I was proud as peaches. She suddenly turned and looked into the horizon as if she had just remembered something really important. "I better go and find my pride." "Hey, not to worry, I'm sure they're alright. All the same, you'd better go." "Okay." She got up to leave. "Cruz," she gave me a look that said thanks more effectively than a platinum thank-you card, "thanks for coming." I smiled a smile that said "you're welcome," and brushed her sooty chin with my finger. "Anytime you need me, just call, and I'll be here." "Thanks." She turned to go, and walked away into the charred, blackened hills of the savanna. Clouds of ash accompanied her every footfall. I needn't worry, she'd be okay. She would, but I wouldn't if I didn't see a doctor soon. A broken rib is a serious thing if left unattended. I hit a few buttons on my forearm computer unit and ... Flash! There I wasn't.
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