Shadow of the Makei: Part 16
Submitted by dmuth on Fri, 2006-02-03 15:49.
Lion King Fanfiction
CHAPTER 43: OMLAKH Melmokh banned private prayer, asking instead for the hyenas to come directly into the presence of their God and speak their mind. He appeared on Ul Khalil rock each night at high moon in the form of a beautiful female hyena, speaking softly and with an outward kindness that hid the blasphemous, dark purpose of his plans. Though many were convinced that God was among them, others were not so easily swayed. Ber and a lot of the intellectuals saw something strange with the new doctrines of the false Roh'kash. They relied on their faith instead of what their eyes told them, and in this regard they could peer through chinks in the armor of Melmokh. This small group held a secret prayer vigil each night while the others were paying homage to the demon. Once when Ber was lying on his back in the depths of prayer, he called upon Roh'kash in tones that melted the hearts of those who heard him as perspiration broke on him and his fur matted. "Almighty mother whose gentleness is like the sunrise, your broken remnant looks to you for deliverance. Is there no word for us? Is there no truth that we must be subject to the lies of traitors and blasphemers? My life for a word. My life for one word of truth to leave behind with these poor souls that love you!" There was a smell of jasmine, and a soft golden light. To Ber's surprise, the lithe, graceful form of a beautiful white lioness emerged. A deep purr emenated from her as she regarded him benevolently, her tail stirring restlessly as she spoke. "Ber, my child, do not listen to the lies of the demon Melmokh who claims to be God. The true God has heard your prayers. There will be night before the dawn, but even in the night there are stars that shine. Be brave, my child." The lioness quickly kissed Ber on the cheek, then dematerialized as quickly as she came. Ber got up, rubbed his cheek with a paw, than said, "Quick, hide! We are not safe here!" The dissenters hurried away to the caves, and none too soon, for a fierce female hyena came hurtling in. She nosed about quickly, trying to smell the tracks and identify who was there, but the only scent to be had was that of jasmine. "Damn you, Minshasa! Stay out of here! This is MY land! I was invited here! This is MINE and you can't have it back!" For a brief moment, the false Roh'kash rippled and changed, becoming a furious, seething male. Looking around with eyes shining red as coals, Melmokh peered into the surrounding grass and rocks looking for those who dared discover his secret. But the lioness had sent a brisk wind that swept the tracks away without a trace. "Come back, and I'll kill you!" he said in a voice that tore at the air, making the very stones in the earth tremble and vibrate with its gutteral fury. "One on one, you meddlesome witch! See if you're so strong when it's just you and me!!" Ber and his intellectuals and the gentle-minded formed a sort of clan within a clan, which got the informal name of The Omlakhs, "the different ones." They prayed to Roh'kash and to the white lioness in a different place each night, sang the ancient hymns and worked to keep the spirit of their faith alive in the descending spiritual darkness. The temptation to follow a visible god who worked miracles was too strong for most of them. They believed whatever the false Roh'kash told them, losing the purity of their faith to the new doctrines of Melmokh, doctrines that sentenced his enemies to a horrible death. Ber and his group continued to worship as their heart told them, holding to the ideals of fairness and freedom that underpinned the old faith and gave it true meaning. Eventually brothers in the same family split over this issue. The Omlakhs kept strict secrecy, terrified of what would happen if someone betrayed them. While not a terrorist organization, under the leadership of Ber, the Omlakhs did try in subtle ways to subvert the will of the Makei. And for this they ended up becoming persecuted. Finally one of their number was found out. A female named Belvalen was trapped and condemned by the false Roh'kash to be tortured to death. For it was Melmokh's wish to snare other Omlkahs. Melmokh made it a test of loyalty that each member of the clan bite her hard enough to draw blood and make her scream. Some of the hyenas were loyal to the false Roh'kash, but they felt cold shudders to pierce the hide of the young female. Melmokh, sensing this, kissed each of the hyenas that bit her. Den'beer was coming up in the line. He shuddered, knowing that he could not hurt her. Of course he knew that he would be given away, and not only die but be used to trap other Omlkahs who would have to torture HIM. He thought of a desperate plan in that moment. He knew that the only hope for his people was something that Melmokh did not understand-- an act of profound love. Belvalen was crouched in the niche where she had been held prisoner, the forbidding rock walls preventing her escape. She cringed as a blast of steam belched from the thermal vent beside her, bathing her in its gusty breath and making her break out in a sweat which was not entirely due to the heat. She shook with the pain of the wounds that had been inflicted on her body, her blood running down her sides in fine streams to pool near the lip of the cauldron next to her, bubbling and hissing as it emitted a hot coppery odor. Her limbs trembled from fear and the loss of blood, and she prayed that the pain would end soon. Her heart sank as the next hyena in line stepped forward. Skulk came up and without hesitation inflicted a severe bite to her flank that made her shriek with agony. Her cry of pain shook Den'beer to the core. "Enough!" he thought. "It ends here!" Now all eyes were on Den'beer. Mortally wounded but still terrified, Belvalen looked at him pleadingly. He smiled sweetly at her. "I love you, Belvalen! Let us greet the true God together!" Relief flooded her face, and she smiled back. "Yes! Come to me!" Before anyone could stop him, he ran to her, ramming into her and bearing her with him into the thermal vent, disappearing into the depths without a sound. In that brief moment, Shimbekh, who could not bear to look at the vent, turned away, her gaze coming to rest on the face of the one she worshipped. Her blood froze as she saw the face of Roh'kash horribly distorted in rage, the features actually running as though seen through a haze of rain, the warm amber eyes turned to crimson points of fire that blazed with wrath. Seconds later, the Mother of All's face returned to normal, and she bowed her head in sadness. "Such is the fate of all those who would not tread the path of righteousness," she intoned sadly. "Let us pray for their souls." Shimbekh trembled as she bowed her head along with the others. How could the true God possess any evil qualities?? She had heard some disturbing rumors flitting about the clan, and some of the feelings she picked up from the hyenas around her did nothing to ease her disquiet. She resolved to speak with Ber at mid moon and find out just what was going on in her troubled family. Putting the thought aside, she turned inwards as the droning monotone of the prayer continued around her. Unbidden, the image of Roh'kash sprang to mind again, her normally beatific features now grossly twisted in a mask of hate. She suddenly found that the soul she was praying for was her own. CHAPTER 44: COUP DE GRACE Simba pranced delightedly about the muddy path, splashing the water with his big paws and laughing at the pretty rainbows they made in the air, the droplets catching the light in an explosion of color before they fell back to earth. Abruptly, another burst of color emerged before him. The cub's face was mesmerized by the fluttering wings of the butterflies which leapt up from the jungle floor, swirling around him in a living carousel of glittering beauty. Entranced, he watched them flit abouot aimlessly, giggling at the sight of the tiny creatures. Playfully, he batted at one. His paw flicked out with deadly accuracy, striking the insect and cuffing it to the earth in a crushing blow. Chagrined, Simba looked down worriedly as the insect struggled to move, but its wings were broken and it was now missing a couple of legs. Concerned, Simba got Pumbaa to look at it. "What should I do?" "Don't eat it, kid. They're bitter." "I don't mean that. I mean-it's going to die. I broke its wings. Is there something I can do to fix it? Can YOU fix it?" Pumbaa stepped forward, crushing it with his hoof. "That's all I can do. It would have suffered." Simba looked horrified. "Pumbaa," he asked, very disturbed, "when you hurt something--by accident for instance--does God punish you if you're really, really sorry?" "I guess it depends on how bad you hurt them, and how sorry you really are." "What if you hurt them really bad? You know, like maybe they died or something? But it was an accident and you were really sorry?" Pumbaa looked at him suspiciously. "Hey, little guy, this friend that did the hurting-did you know him well?" Simba's whiskers trembled slightly. "Uh, no. I was just wondering." "Well that's good. But the way I see it, this person you don't know should apologize for what it is they did. And if that person was a lot like you-you know, nice and kind and thoughtful-I think God would not hold it against them." "Yeah." He nuzzled Pumbaa, then goaded the warthog into a wrestling match. As the day wore on, however, Simba found many moments to reflect on the conversation. Deeply troubled, he padded quietly away from Timon and Pumbaa that evening as the stars began to emerge into the sky. He made his way quietly to his favorite spot; atop a rotted tree stump near a muddy washout. The cub padded slowly through the dead undergrowth, broken stalks and twigs showing clearly that he had passed this way before many times. He leapt lightly to the top of the stump and craned his head up to look at the reason he came here so often. A small break in the triple canopy foliage overhead offered an unobstructed view of a swath of stars that he had come to know well. Pumbaa eased through the buses to the opening the cub had made and peered through, wondering why Simba wandered off to this desolate clearing. As he caught sight of the cub, he drew back, embarrassed; Simba's face was stricken as he searched the heavens above. "I'm sorry! I'm sorry!" He opened his mouth again, but all that emerged was a choked sob. Timon clambered up Pumbaa's back to perch atop his head. "Well? What's he doing-" His jaw shut with a snap as he saw Simba hunched on the stump, head buried under his forepaws and bawling hoarsely. "Aw, jeez..." He slid down Pumbaa's snout, preparing to run over to the cub, when Pumbaa flicked his head, sending the meerkat sailing back behind to land on his broad back. "Whattya doin'?" "No. Let the little guy alone." Tears ran down Pumbaa's cheeks. "He's a little guy with a big problem."
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